The leaves above me: a #haiku Posted on July 6, 2019July 7, 2019 by Carl Setzer As I look upwards These leaves’ beautiful pattern A sign of illness Share this: Click to share on X (Opens in new window) X Click to share on Facebook (Opens in new window) Facebook Click to share on Tumblr (Opens in new window) Tumblr Click to share on Pinterest (Opens in new window) Pinterest Click to share on Reddit (Opens in new window) Reddit Like Loading... Related Published by Carl Setzer Writing haiku trying to figure out life View all posts by Carl Setzer
What? A sign of illness? Why? How about this: As I look upward, these leaves’ beautiful pattern, nature in harmony. LikeLiked by 1 person
Apparently, the leaves turning brown is a sign the tree is sick. Though the leaves are pretty, this tree is dying. LikeLiked by 1 person
The irony is that I, too, am sick. But the poem was focusing on the tree. My germs probably directed my focus a certain way, though. 🙂 LikeLike
What? A sign of illness? Why? How about this: As I look upward, these leaves’ beautiful pattern, nature in harmony.
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Apparently, the leaves turning brown is a sign the tree is sick. Though the leaves are pretty, this tree is dying.
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So that’s what you meant! The tree is sick, not you.
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The irony is that I, too, am sick. But the poem was focusing on the tree. My germs probably directed my focus a certain way, though. 🙂
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So sorry.
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