An evening walk: tonight’s haiku Posted on May 9, 2019May 25, 2019 by Carl Setzer This night was lovely Walking alone with my thoughts While the sun descends Share this:TwitterFacebookTumblrPinterestRedditLike this:Like Loading... Related Published by Carl Setzer Technologist, Explorer, Haiku Writer, Photographer View all posts by Carl Setzer
I’m wondering if the last line is supposed to end with descends. I’m not trying to correct your writing, of course, but wanted to mention it just in case an inadvertent error occurred. LikeLike
I’m wondering if the last line is supposed to end with descends. I’m not trying to correct your writing, of course, but wanted to mention it just in case an inadvertent error occurred.
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You’re spot on. Autocorrect has been duplicating lines lately. Don’t know why.
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You’ll see that I’ve updated the post. Thanks so very much for catching that, Dave.
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